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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 11:06:31 GMT 1
I make this poem as a resume from Raven rincess 2. Please, let me give my poem to all Corrs fan base member (Especially Mr Tune Poet, Ms Kerry, Mr steve, Ms Senna, Mr AndyPandy,and Ms David) as my gift to this board. I'm very honoured can join this wonderful site. I'll be looking forward for any critics, comments,and advice.
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 11:13:28 GMT 1
I'm sorry. Actually, i must post it into Sharon's board, but i made mistake. Right now, i caught in hurry, so i can't move it. Please, Mr Tune Poet, would you like to move My Raven Princess into Sharon's other topic. But right now, please enjoy it....
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 11:14:20 GMT 1
Tales of Raven 4There's no smile, there's no happiness. Only an empty palace without leader, Only a soul without spirit, and only black feather as a memento. Since the Raven gone, the Prince became down. The throne was ignored, the duty was leaved. He was tortured by heartache and loneliness, But never try to find the remedy. Heaven has refused his appeal... He asked to the wind, but it always silent.... He inquired to water, but never get the answer.... And he know that nature try to separate his love. Nature is strong, but love is stronger, The Prince didn't care if he must fight against Heaven. With the Sword of Promise and the Shield of faith, He went to find his Raven princess.....
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 11:15:35 GMT 1
Tales of Raven 5Raven Princess stays in heaven..... She ives with Aphrodite, served by Cupid. Athena protecs her, Artemis guards her..... And her violin gives and immortal pleasures to the Gods. But, her memory never die.... The Prince always stays in her heart.... Always waiting at the bridge of love...... In the veil of dark night.... The Raven runaway fom heaven. She want to meet the Prince, Before Gods separate them. The Raven could deceive the moon, then went down to the earth, She passed tornado, ran through the sand storm..... Her golden feathers torn, but her love never weaken... She is only thinking the way to realize her dreams. After a long journey............. Beautiful Raven reached the Palace. She explore that place happily, But couln't find her love at there..........
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 11:16:56 GMT 1
Tales of Raven 6The Prince begin his adventure, Through the evil forest, crss the lake of despair.... Only to meet his beloved Raven. Te Nature never stop t interfere his effort. It sent blade of wind that pierce Shield of faith, Struck Jupiter thunder to Prince's body, And summon God of Hopeless to broke Sword of promise After lost her Prince... Raven Princess went back to Heaven..... In her way, she saw a bridge of love.... Then stopped there for a moment. The Prince was very powerless... His heart has broken, his body has wounded... He followed the scattered golden feathers... That lead him into bridge of love, And find the Raven with golden dress...... The Prince approach his love, and threw thousands smile But the Raven couldn't say anything, only dropped thousands tears..... Without voice, she embraced her love..... The Prince said " Please don't cry" And then died happily in the Raven's embrace
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Post by SingleTunePoet on Apr 6, 2005 14:05:10 GMT 1
I'm sorry. Actually, i must post it into Sharon's board, but i made mistake. Right now, i caught in hurry, so i can't move it. Please, Mr Tune Poet, would you like to move My Raven Princess into Sharon's other topic. But right now, please enjoy it.... I just moved it. And I printed the whole thing out. I will read it later today! I´ll let you now what i think about it. ;D
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 8, 2005 9:53:01 GMT 1
Thank you very much Ms Swantje, you're very kind!!! I'll be waiting for your comments
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Post by SingleTunePoet on Apr 8, 2005 14:48:58 GMT 1
Firsat of all: Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us! I just send you a PM! Please read it.
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