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Post by SingleTunePoet on Jun 24, 2005 15:43:41 GMT 1
Consequences
Red wine, clinging to white walls just like my brother´s blood that, thank God, I saved from your chivalry. What´s it that´s burning in your head when you´re sitting on your volcano while I´m collecting pieces of history, unable to put them back the way they were; the inability of speech spilled all over my new shirt and, see, I can´t seem to take it off again! Who´s to unravel minusule, woven cloths and the endless opacity of your placebo? It can´t be me, for I´ll never have a naked moment unter the moon again, just blind wandering through your intuitive minefield. Dwelling below the pillars of disguise I hum a silent tune that you won´t hear with your head diving into numbness. Spasm is what spasm causes, the synthesis of your lavatory, a morass of cheap eruptions and delusive movements. I still see you swerving through unrelenting nausea, unmasked, now that I ripped of your once so lovely skin. Who´s the protagonist in this anthology? Life´s sacrosanct, you used to say but now that´s just an old wives´ tale. So excuse me, maybe my questions were too reproachful, I won´t be asking them again.
By Swantje Mahn May 2005
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Post by rfewrewr on Jun 25, 2005 6:11:07 GMT 1
Hi....hi....hi!!!! Very Good!!! This is my favourite!!!
Btw, why your poem always sorrowful but meaningful? Your poems style similiar to your drawing style, and they have special ''feature'' that only could create by Ms Swantje.
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Post by SingleTunePoet on Jun 25, 2005 10:25:27 GMT 1
Thank you for liking it Wiku!
Why are my poems sorrowful but meaningful? Well, not all of the poems are sorrowful of course. But anyway, THIS one above truely came to life ´cause of a whole lot of pain and frustration. "Consequences" is the most personal poem I ever wrote and it´s not so easy to write personal ones, cause it hurts...
But I also often write poems that are just based on imagination or something i overheard somewhere...
I want poems to also have a certain sound, so that it is pleasure to read them out loud, that´s why I choose the words carefully...
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