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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 10:55:28 GMT 1
Please allow me to give a poem/story titled The Raven Princess. I've posted it in Corrnucopia, but i want to share it with Corr fan base member. I know at this has a great poet such Mr Single Tune Poet so there must be a lot of people that can help me to improve my ability.
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 10:58:20 GMT 1
  Tale of Raven A Raven sits on single branch, Throws her sight into window of love. Without voice she says, "I love you" The Prince stares at the sky, Wishing for eternal love. When he hold his sight, A figure of Raven was whipping out. When they see each other.... The wind that blows love was coming. When they try to touch their soul..... The stars wassinging. When their distance narrower.... The bridge of love was appearing. Under the protection of the moon, The night is testifying.... About unity of two God's creatures  |
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 11:00:17 GMT 1
 Tales of Raven 2 At the wide sky beautiful Raven fies, Leaving the Prince sadly. She has given her feather to the Prince, As a memento in their separation. The Prince stands behind the curtain, Cannot stop thinking about the Raven. He want to chase his love, But even doesn't have any wing to fly. The Prince is screaming to the Heaven: "Give me a little wing!!!" But the Heaven doesn't say anything, Letting the Prince within despair. Without wing, the Prince lost his Raven.... He can't do anything, just staring at the sky. Now, he is only wishing...... That the Raven willing to visit him.  |
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Post by rfewrewr on Apr 6, 2005 11:01:43 GMT 1
 Tales of Raven 3 Beautiful Raven is exploring the world now..... Summer Sunshine has turned her feathers, from black into brown...... If the night turnover, She will sleep on the bed of clouds. If the morning come, The sun will wake her.... Dews will serve her to adorn.... And honey will fill her body with sweets. The Raven attracts nature with her music... Bringing happiness, remove sadness... Inviting rainbow without rain. She loved by nature and praised by heaven.... Adored by the sky, admired by the sea. Heaven confer a dress to the Raven, as a proof of their respect... That dress was embroidered by fairies, Made from threads of fate, And delivered by thousands Angels.... When the Raven wears the magical dress, The lights dance around her body... It changes her brown feather into gold.... and makes the Raven as a true Princess. 
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Post by SharonCorr on Sept 7, 2005 23:43:37 GMT 1
you are a very good poet, and such a beautiful poem! you have real talent!
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Post by HollyJana13 on Jun 23, 2006 18:13:01 GMT 1
Oh wow, this is so good, everything  |
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Post by XD on Jun 24, 2006 13:12:39 GMT 1
dia dhuit
uauuu you have a great talent wiku pulangasih, it`s a wonderful poem.
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